Feedback- Journal Topic 12

 The feedback was really helpful because without it I wouldn't notice how I had those tiny mistakes. I was giving suggesting  to ask someone to read it and tell me what should I change but first I reread it and change a few things. Once I did I ask Dael to read it he found two little thing that wear wrong and I change it and told to read it again and he said its all good. But if it wasn't for the feedback I wound not have  notice the tiny mistakes.

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